This ain't drum and bass...
This is just noise =P Sorry, but it's true. You need to start learning how to master your sounds better. I dont' even have to look at an EQ to tell this song is distorting through the roof. You have the right idea and the beats cool, but it's too overpowering. You should tone down the sounds a TON and let the listener decide how loud it is. 9 on originality. 6 on diversity, try not making it so repetitive...DnB isn't always the same thing four measures, then a change or two here and there. Try tweaking it up a little more. Clarity is a four, simply because you need some major volume adjustments on it. You put effort into it, so i'll give you a seven. Not bad, but you could have gone further =P Work towards getting the full version. It's well worth it!
No =/ Sorry mate. Putting that much delay on instruments does not sound good. I agree, the guitars sound cool but you can barely hear them. In my opinion, destroy the thought of trying to make this song. Remixes aren't that great, anyways, as it doesn't really show how much talent you truly have. Try doing something on your own, and remember. There are knobs on the FL Delay for a reason! Tone it down otherwise you'll get too much sound at once which causes distortion.
Yeah you could have gone further...
Try listening to some professional mixes to get an idea of what the Electronica genre is all about. DJ Tiesto, George Acosta, Total Euphoria, and a few other big names that are out there. Listening to those will give you a really big picture of what sounds great to other people. Keep practicing with FL, you're getting better. I wanna hear more original work for you, and you should get the full version so you can hit up Collab. See you around
Nice! I love this song
Seven on originality just because I really want you to start writing your own stuff =P Tens across the board the rest of the way though. This is really well done. I can tell you didn't just move patterns around, you actually changed up a lot here and there and i'm impressed. Keep up the good work, but try to gear towards starting your own work soon.
cheers m8, thanks for the ideas, i'll definetly start making my own stuff, i'm just waiting for inspiration, glad u like nywayz, i think when the voice same up i should of done sume equalizer stuff going on to make the beat stand out more.
I think you need to tone down the higher frequency of the first synth...it's a little to high for the ears to take at a medium to high volume. Other than that nice job. FL Studio has some good stuff to offer, but I think you should focus on writing original stuff. I admit, I use to remix all the 'Cool Stuff' songs for practice, but from the sound of it you don't need the practice. Hope to see some more stuff by you soon! Keep up the good work...
yeah, i cant really be inovative cos i only got FL demo which basically means no saving and half the stuff is nothing, i acnt keep it open for more than a week cos i got a bro on the pc aswell, but my dad says if i get good grades, he'll buy me the full version, thanks for the reviews guys really appriciate it.
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